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    [TSS]AngryUnibrow
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    Some Poetry

    Post by [TSS]AngryUnibrow on Wed Jan 18, 2012 10:34 pm

    Just read at and give me your honest opinion. I had to write poetry for Language Arts and I have the opportunity to submit it to a contest.

    Life

    Life is a clock
    The clock ticks
    The clock tocks

    The clock can be Regular or Ornate
    Beautiful or Ugly
    Strong or Weak

    One major component of the clock is the gears
    The gears keep the clock of life moving
    The gears keep the ticks ticking and the tocks tocking
    The gears are very sensitive though
    In times of hate and negativity the gears slow and stop

    When the gears stop, the clock of life stops ticking, it stops tocking
    Life does not have to stop, does not have to end due to hate or negativity
    The individual that owns the clock in their soul has to fix the clock, to overcome the hate and negativity
    To keep it moving, ticking, and tocking
    To keep the wonderful element of life going to the fullest
    With happiness and joy
    Friends and family

    Life is a clock
    Work hard to keep that clock moving
    Never give up, never quit
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    Razor
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    Re: Some Poetry

    Post by Razor on Thu Jan 19, 2012 12:01 am

    Not bad.


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    [TSS]TonyMetal
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    Re: Some Poetry

    Post by [TSS]TonyMetal on Thu Jan 19, 2012 3:35 am

    I liked it man
    Never give up, never quit
    I liked that part bro.


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    [TSS]AngryUnibrow
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    Re: Some Poetry

    Post by [TSS]AngryUnibrow on Thu Jan 19, 2012 9:10 am

    Thanks for your insight, I'll check what the prize is and think about entering.


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    Re: Some Poetry

    Post by Peppery on Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:12 pm

    It doesnt rhyme Sad lol jk that was good Angry! Very Happy


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    Re: Some Poetry

    Post by [TSS]AngryUnibrow on Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:18 pm

    Peppery wrote:It doesnt rhyme Sad lol jk that was good Angry! Very Happy
    Not all poems need to rhyme, just look at Frost or Shakespeare.
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    Re: Some Poetry

    Post by Peppery on Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:45 pm

    ik lol. We do Shakespeare in school and other weird stuff


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    Re: Some Poetry

    Post by [TSS]TonyMetal on Sat Jan 21, 2012 4:38 pm

    Peppery wrote:ik lol. We do Shakespeare in school and other weird stuff
    In my school is different
    "The roses are red, the shit is brown, and i dont give a shit if i win or not"
    That guy won lol


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